A2 - Level 2: Unit 3 - Writing exercise 6
Writing: A descriptive e-mail
Imagine you've just moved to a new apartament. Write an e-mail to a friend comparing your old apartament to your new one.
Example:
Dear Emma,
How are things with you? My bigs news is that Mike and I just moved to a new apartament ! Do you remember our old apartament ? It didn't have enough bedrooms for us. Well, the new apartament has three bedrooms. Also, the old apartament was too cramped, but the new one...
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I have had to change my old apartment because this was too far from my work; I almost always spent around one hour an half to get it.
I found a beautiful apartment in downtown; it is more convenient than the old one because it is near to my job, to my English’s classes and to the bus station. Also there are many stores, restaurants and malls around it. This place isn't too noisy though.
The new apartment aren't as a big as the old one, since the new one has only two bedrooms, and a bathroom , while the old one had three bedrooms and a two bathrooms. But the new one has a modern style, with a bright living room and a huge kitchen. also the new sight is better than before, even this way both flats have the seem rent cost.
However the new neighborhood isn’t safe enough at nights, and is a little dingy. It doesn't have enough parking spaces, and they cost too much money. The neighbors aren't as friendly as at the old neighborhood. And the old neighborhood didn't have as much polluting as this.
Dear DAVID
Hi!!! who are you? i tell you of my new apartment, my new home is very big for my and is very comfortable but take one problem is very very noisy why i take a university neighbors but my old apartment was had more problems why this was very small and cramped by i prefer the new apartment, also my new apartment take 3 windows, 2 rooms and 2 bathrooms, is very convenient.
see you later
DEAR KATHERIN
How are you? I want tell you about the house. It has very small and dark, has 2 bedrooms, 1 bathroom. It was very dangerous and noisy.
Now I moved to a big house with enough light. It was 3 bedrooms, 3 bathrooms. It was very safe and quiet.
TAKE CARE!
Sonia
hi Caroline!!
I will change my old apartament because is very small,
shabby, dark and it didn't have enough bedrooms for us.
I want a new apartament big and bright, it has 5 bedrooms
and 3 bathdrooms, is very beautiful and convenient.
see you
Nebay
hi Victoria
How are you ? I hope that excelent....I writing these letter to you ause I want to share with You this factantic news.. I moved to a new aparment this apartment is so great! it has two rooms more that my old apartment that also had a one room,you should look the kitchen is bigger that my old it..Do you remenber how was it?....jejeje.And the best is garden,`cause I can have a my dear pet..Do you know it..?mmm I think that no but however I telling to You.. his name is donald,it`s five years...so I was worried for its..but now with this gigantic garden I can be happy with its.My dear in conclusion You should come hear but You can gaze at my apartent.
My best wishes
by Sandra